English 1A – 5pm section (1371)

5-5:10pm:  How are you?  Tell us about/narrate your day…

5:10-5:25pm:  Review of last class… What we’re doing this semester.

5:25-5:35pm:  Questions about the syllabus.

5:35-5:45pm:  Freewritng.  Not just how you begin an essay, or a reaction, or anything.  Yes, you should always edit and organize your composition later, but there should always be a sense of FREEDOM, and a freeing feel to your writing.  Writing is often taught from the riles of and calls for more structure, rather than expression.  Even a critical essay, or “analytical” one, should be expressive.  Expression should ALWAYS be free on the page.  Thoughts?  What has your experience been?

5:45-6pm:  What’s an essay supposed to do, anyway?

6-6:15pm:  When you hear “Composition”, what is the first thing you think?

6:15-6:35pm:  Composition is a piece of writing, a submission that is composed, together, self-supported.  A stand-alone piece, if you will.  It should also be noted, that composition entails several parts, and a consistency of Art, expression, uniqueness and music..

Post your own definition of “Composition”, below

6:35-6:40pm:  What is your style of Composition?  Does it involve any Humor?  Search for Happiness?  Or, a strengthening of existing Happiness?

6:40-7pm:  Close….  What’s on tonight’s page?  What are you going to write in your journal?

Assignment:  Write in your journal, OBSESSIVELY.  And, more importantly, FREELY.

And…..  please buy David Sedars’ book if you haven’t already.

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  1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

    This is something that I hold more than crucially and core to my core…… Complaining is NOT composition. Make it your own, whatever it is. Make it work. Grievances put your production and creativity in a grave. You decide. Seriously, as I get older, I just want to tell every student everywhere to just write your own story… make it YOURS. You don’t even have to make it yours… IT ALREADY IS.

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  2. victor verdugo's avatar victor verdugo says:

    I emailed you professor mike! im pretty sure I wont have any questions about the syllabus and if I do ill let you know!

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      Cool… will respond either tonight or tomorrow morning.

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  3. Bailey Krehbiel's avatar Bailey Krehbiel says:

    i don’t currently have any questions about the semester

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      Let me know if that changes! Always here to help.

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  4. Shantel Shaw's avatar Shantel Shaw says:

    How will we know what our grade is in the class I couldn’t find that?

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    1. Im wondering the same thing actually

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      1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

        Talk. To. Me. …….. ASK. ME. ……. CONVERSATION.

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    2. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      You ask me. A conversation. Easy.

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      1. do you know how we can find where are grade is for this class?

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      2. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

        You ask me…

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      3. Shantel Shaw's avatar Shantel Shaw says:

        Perfect, thank you! Just wasn’t sure if I missed it.

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  5. Gianina Mencarini's avatar Gianina Mencarini says:

    Is their a minimum or maximum to our journal writings?

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      No. And no. Just have it be passionate, and FREE… insightful and REAL.

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  6. are journal writings mandatory?

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      No. But I highly suggest them.

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      1. oh okay, roger that.

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  7. Mat Lybrand's avatar Mat Lybrand says:

    Just need some clarification, are journals something that we are doing for our self or is this something that we are going to have to turn in to you?

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    1. victor verdugo's avatar victor verdugo says:

      this is a good question. I was trying to put this in words but you hit it spot on

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      1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

        They are for you, and to share if you want. Keeping a journal helps you trap ideas. I HIGHLY suggest you have one. You want to be a better/stronger reader and writer then it’s pretty obvious you need to be writing about what you read.

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    2. Elsy.'s avatar Elsy. says:

      I was wondering about this too

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      1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

        See my response.

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    3. Shantel Shaw's avatar Shantel Shaw says:

      That was actually my second question as well.

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  8. Bailey Krehbiel's avatar Bailey Krehbiel says:

    i dont really understand what were supposed to do with the free writing.

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      1. Bailey Krehbiel's avatar Bailey Krehbiel says:

        now i am more confused, do i write about literally anything? like how i current want to be a superhero or? is the free writing supposed to be in the journals?

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      2. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

        Write freely in the journal, on something for you, or in response to one of the readings or one of the class meetings, an idea expressed. The journal is for you. If you are confused, call me..

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  9. niannavalle's avatar niannav says:

    do we write in them everyday, or will you be telling us when to do entries?

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      Whatever you think is best. The journal is for you, and for some added credit if you like.

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      1. Tuan Dao's avatar Tuan Dao says:

        I was wondering if the journal can be a sketchbook/journal or is it words only.

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  10. Dominic Costantino's avatar Dominic Costantino says:

    Is the idea to write for enjoyment and then we’ll also write stuff to turn into you? I wish we could send gifs in this that’d be super cute.

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      The journal is for everything pertaining to this class, and for you.

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      1. Elsy.'s avatar Elsy. says:

        Now i get it .

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  11. Patrick Sullivan's avatar Patrick Sullivan says:

    Can I get the syllabus re-mailed to me please? Does it tell us what book we are starting first.
    pqsully2@gmail.com

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    1. victor verdugo's avatar victor verdugo says:

      we are starting that one book about diabetes and owls

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    2. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      Email me, and I will email it to you. My email is mmadigan@santarosa.edu.

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      1. Patrick Q Sullivan's avatar Patrick Q Sullivan says:

        OK thank you, I believe I already did email you. Thats lucky because I have already read David Sedaris book before.

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  12. wasn’t the topic today suppost to be the importance of humor ? I was actually pretty interested in talking about that but i’m not sure if that’s what we are doing now?

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      Then let’s talk about it!!

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  13. It’s funny because every time I think about writing freely I never know how to start or what I should write. Until one day I decided to write everything that was coming to my mind and it was pretty interesting. Even though freedom is something (in all the ways) that everybody seeks, it also brings insecurity. Just my point of view

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    1. niannavalle's avatar niannav says:

      That is so well put. Too much freedom can also cause trouble

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    2. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      When one thinks about writing, it is more of a block to the writing than an nurturer to it.

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    3. adrianv7272's avatar adrianv7272 says:

      write when you first wake up seems to help my brain work. write about your dreams maybe, I usually forget most of mine.

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      1. @Adrianv7272 thanks for the tip. I always remember my dreams. I will start doing it.

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      2. noahfruge's avatar noahfruge says:

        Ive never thought about writing right as I wake up but that is actually a really good idea. I couldn’t tell you the last time i woke up and remembered my dream from the night before but writing right when I wake up could definitely change that

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      3. victor verdugo's avatar victor verdugo says:

        cool idea I have interesting dreams!! do you guys think dreams mean anything???

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      4. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

        You can make them mean something… especially when you write them down.

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      5. victor verdugo's avatar victor verdugo says:

        hmm alright that’s a sick idea!! I always look up what some of my dreams mean and its crazy true.

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      6. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

        You can do that as well!! I’ve done that, and the symbolism in dreams is RAD!!

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    4. Great point of view, I totally agree with you, I also would like to add however that I believe everyone is not ready for freedom and it is not something that suits everyone well. Though I think some seek freedom and don’t produce insecurity from it.

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      1. @Victor there are a lot of theories and beliefs about what our dreams mean. It really depends on what you believe. According to science your when you sleep you select the memories that you want to keep and the short and long memories ”storage”. So basically all your dreams are relate to what you have lived/seem even thought you don’t really remember those memories.

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  14. Abie Prieto's avatar Abie Prieto says:

    I feel that my experience with free writing hasn’t been so free. To be honest I don’t even remember the last time I have sat down and let the writing takes its course. Hopefully writing in my journal changes that.

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      You can change that with this class!!

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  15. Dominic Costantino's avatar Dominic Costantino says:

    I feel like writing is so hard because of how many distractions there are in the real world. I can imagine my thoughts, but then I struggle to get the ideas on paper. It’s also hard to sit myself down and concentrate on writing my mind gets loopy.

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      Use those distractions somehow. It can be done.

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  16. osirisaguirre's avatar osirisaguirre says:

    Freewriting is hard for me at times because I get stuck and don’t know what to write about. I enjoy having a prompt to lead my train of thought. Although, I do like the freedom of freewriting because it can lead anywhere.

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  17. noahfruge's avatar noahfruge says:

    Do we have a topic to freewrite about tonight? Or are we just going for whatever we want?

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      I think that question answers itself. FREEwriting.

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  18. Daniel Bagley's avatar Daniel Bagley says:

    I believe you should be able to write whatever you want on paper so long as it doesn’t violate the amendments and or wrongful defamation. I believe you should be able to say what you want however you must bring evidence to the table if you’re to speak about someone. Slander is not okay in my book and is a cheap and low blow for anyone. Generally though you should be able to express yourself however you want. From my personal experience ive always tried to support what ive said with evidence so that my arguments and papers have plenty of support.

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  19. jakesilva753's avatar jakesilva753 says:

    Freewriting can go both ways for me, I love the idea of getting to write what I want. But at the same time I almost get overwhelmed because there’s so many ideas rushing through my head.

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    1. Sarah Harrison's avatar Sarah Harrison says:

      Agreed, Jake! That’s exactly how I feel!

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    2. Mat Lybrand's avatar Mat Lybrand says:

      Same thing happens to me when I am free writing. The writing morphs topics the longer I go.

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    3. Paige Davenport's avatar Paige Davenport says:

      Same here i have so many ideas in my head!

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      1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

        Write them all!!! Let none die!!

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  20. Gianina Mencarini's avatar Gianina Mencarini says:

    Guys, you’re free writing right now! Commenting and responding! Don’t over think it!

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      Well put, Nina!! Your sister know what’s up…. 🙂

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  21. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

    The journal is for YOU. That’s where you should be the most FREE. Understand? Thoughts?

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  22. Dominic Costantino's avatar Dominic Costantino says:

    I feel like everything is fair game for writing as long as you aren’t a jerk about it. Free speech and free writing are great, but thou must remember the golden rule that says very clearly: jerks don’t get nowhere in life because they’re jerks. Amen.

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      EVERYTHING is a topic. Something worth of manuscript and readership….

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  23. Alric Thomas III's avatar Alric Thomas III says:

    Writing freely is something I used to do in my AVID high school class. They would make us quietly write about anything we wanted as long as it was coherent and we wrote for the whole lenght of time. (2-3 min). It’s a good thing to do especially after long days, it’s a way to unwind and unload your mind of everything that happened that day.

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  24. where will we bill writing this page on is it still somewhere on professor mikey, or are we writing on an alternate program and importing it to this website?

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      You submit assignments to me via email, and meet for class here. Simple.

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  25. noahfruge's avatar noahfruge says:

    I don’t think I have ever truly sat down and just let my mind wander on the page. I do think I should be doing that now because at the least it will help me remember things LOL.

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      Yes. Write and be free, and HAPPY.

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  26. Paloma's avatar Paloma says:

    I enjoy free writing a lot. I have always struggled to reign in my writing. I’d always write way too much if there was not a max word limit on essays. However, I don’t wanna bore people so recently I’ve been working on being more concise while still conveying my ideas and thoughts

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      There is mastery in being concise, and there is laziness in being long-winded…

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      1. Paloma's avatar Paloma says:

        I’ve never thought about it that way! I’ll definitely keep it in mind 🙂

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  27. Aiden Seifert's avatar Aiden Seifert says:

    Freewriting in my experience is something I have fun with being that there are no rules or formulas you have to follow. I usually free write as a way to focus my energy and sometimes vent out my frustrations. Looking back on some it makes me remember how I felt when I was writing it. Any English teacher I’ve had so far has always acknowledged freewriting as a exercise once in a while but never really pushed it as something to do in your spare time. Honestly wish I would have started doing it sooner.

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    2. Paloma's avatar Paloma says:

      I’m in the same boat. I’m excited that this class is gonna be an opportunity to start

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      1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

        BOOOM!!!! Love the attitude.

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  28. osirisaguirre's avatar osirisaguirre says:

    An essay is supposed to support your thesis with examples/reasoning.

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  29. Dominic Costantino's avatar Dominic Costantino says:

    Oh cute question real quick: Where can we see our grade as we progress in the course? Or can I pick my own grade? hehe

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      Yeah, hilarious. You ask me for your grade. I am the most accessible instructor at SRJC, period. You can call, text, email, whatever you wish!!!

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    2. Gianina Mencarini's avatar Gianina Mencarini says:

      You don’t pick your own grade, you MAKE it

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      1. victor verdugo's avatar victor verdugo says:

        I think he was just joking lol

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      2. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

        Get it NINAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!

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  30. victor verdugo's avatar victor verdugo says:

    few reasons for an essay… to explain what you get from a subject or to see how you think or perceive stuff.

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  31. Elsy.'s avatar Elsy. says:

    The only free writing i have been doing is texting that is if that counts . Honestly i don’t have time to keep a journal. (well i guess with this class i have to find time, lol )

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      You always have time.

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  32. Shantel Shaw's avatar Shantel Shaw says:

    When I have the opportunity to FREEWRITE I tend to write about my day or something that I enjoy. I am not the best writer and I don’t write too often, but when I do I feel refreshed. Freewriting is when I can shut everything else down around me and just reflect on myself because let me tell you my life is an open book.

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    1. Tuan Dao's avatar Tuan Dao says:

      Nice and same here. Whenever I free write I’m in my own world. Every time I freewrite Iike to switch around on different topics from my day to stuff like a biography.

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  33. I love to free write I never have done it on my own but I have done it classes for short amounts of time(>5 mins). Though I love to be able to flow my ideas the way I want to and have the context and narrative be new each write. I love the flexibility of it you feel amazing being able to write all your own ideas on a page.

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  34. Daniel Bagley's avatar Daniel Bagley says:

    An essay is a paper that supports a certain point of view and is generally backed by evidence to help the argument of the person writing the paper. Famous examples of literature that can be argued as Essays include the Declaration of Independence and The 95 Theses written by Martin Luther in the 16th century. Both were statements written by people arguing a certain point of view. For the Declaration of Independence its the view that the united states must separate from the crown to become its own country. The 95 theses was a book published to criticize the roman catholic church for the blatant corruption in the 16th century.

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    1. Gianina Mencarini's avatar Gianina Mencarini says:

      You know your stuff!

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  35. Aiden Seifert's avatar Aiden Seifert says:

    The purpose of an essay can be for almost any reason but the most common reason people write essays is to present an argument or point of view and back it up with evidence to prove yourself correct.

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  36. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

    An essay to me is written architecture….

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    1. niannavalle's avatar niannav says:

      I’ve never thought of it that way, but that is exactly what it is. And without a good foundation the whole thing will fall. I really like the way you put it

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      1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

        Thank you!!!!!!

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  37. Shantel Shaw's avatar Shantel Shaw says:

    An essay gives people something to read and an opportunity to persuade or engage someone in the writing.

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  38. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

    Supported, sightly, organized, pre-meditated and DRAWN.

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  39. Sarah Harrison's avatar Sarah Harrison says:

    I believe an essay in a format for composing thoughts. It’s a concise way to get whatever your point is, across to the reader. There is a loose (or sometimes) rigid format that helps everything to flow well and acts as a guide for both the writer and the reader.

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  40. Mat Lybrand's avatar Mat Lybrand says:

    Essays can do a lot of things. Depends on what the essay is trying to achieve. Like it can explain a certain topic or tell a story.

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  41. Abie Prieto's avatar Abie Prieto says:

    For the most part, An essay main purpose is to explain a point or prove a point. To show evidence. Maybe even change someone perspective or answer on that specific topic

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  42. Paige Davenport's avatar Paige Davenport says:

    I tend to free write in my journal and in letters to my boyfriend in military bootcamp right now. I tell him everything going on in my head and what happened throughout the day / week etc. I feel very relaxed while doing this because even though I can’t talk to him, i’m expressing the thoughts in my head.

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  43. Giovanni Vaca's avatar Giovanni Vaca says:

    I have never done my own journal but im excited!!!

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  44. Alric Thomas III's avatar Alric Thomas III says:

    Essays are used to either inform the audience about something, convince the audience of something, or to entertain the audience while still informing them.

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  45. Shantel Shaw's avatar Shantel Shaw says:

    This question makes me think of Family Feud… Composition Notebook!

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    1. Paige Davenport's avatar Paige Davenport says:

      haha i love it

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    2. jakesilva753's avatar jakesilva753 says:

      Same ahaha

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  46. Paige Davenport's avatar Paige Davenport says:

    I feel like the main purpose for an essay would be to persuade someone or try to prove a point. Also, another point for an essay would be to express adoration something and inform the reader.

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      Clearly and coherently convey your conviction…. don’t seek to change someone’s mind.

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      1. Paige Davenport's avatar Paige Davenport says:

        That spoke to me

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  47. Dominic Costantino's avatar Dominic Costantino says:

    Essays have negative connotations for me because they feel tedious oftentimes with subjects that lack relevance (in my experience.)

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      Your experience I’m guessing from the way essay writing was introduced to you, and the way it was “taught”.

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    2. Alric Thomas III's avatar Alric Thomas III says:

      I agree because we rarely get to write essays on topics we are interested in.

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      1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

        You will here. Enjoy!!

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      2. Tuan Dao's avatar Tuan Dao says:

        Right!!! If there is a topic I have to write about that I find an interest in I always put my best effort in it.

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  48. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

    Oh… and overthinking the journal, and freewriting, iseasy to do. It’s even easier to STOP.

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  49. Bailey Krehbiel's avatar Bailey Krehbiel says:

    an essay shows point of view, a new or different perspective

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    1. Paige Davenport's avatar Paige Davenport says:

      i totally agree!!!

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    2. victor verdugo's avatar victor verdugo says:

      yuppp!

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  50. adrianv7272's avatar adrianv7272 says:

    When I freewrite I lose myself in the text. I get immersed in the paper and sometimes it doesn’t have a clear end. I combine ideas and from those ideas new ones emerge. I hope to reign in the chaos better.

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    1. mikemadigan's avatar mikemadigan says:

      Reign, maybe… but REALIZE, yes!!

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    2. Alric Thomas III's avatar Alric Thomas III says:

      I feel that. Sometimes freewriting is harder to stop than to start…at least for me. Once I get in a groove I can’t stop😂

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